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Wednesday, April 30, 2014

100 Word Wednesday: The Flames

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100 Word Wednesday: The best day of the week!!

I changed a word in the prompt. (sorry) This is based on my book THE AFTERLIFE OF LIZZIE MONROE.
Today's prompt: I stared at the flames that had...


Shane stared at the flames that had grown into a roaring blaze.  He thought he should feel something. Remorse? Regret? It was a church after all. An old church. A closed church, but a church none-the-less. People had gotten saved there. People had gotten married there.

And therein was the rub.

Years ago, two people were joined in matrimony in that church. One was a person he loved. One he hated.

His parents.

The fire roared.

Burning the horrible place that had ruined his life.

He turned to leave when he heard it.

A scream.

But it had been empty.

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Here are the other blogs. Click to read some more awesome 100 word stories! Happy Wednesday!!!!!

Wendy Knight, Author: www.wendyknightauthor.blogspot.com
Alison Woods (Peering Into. . .): http://alisonmillerwoods.wordpress.com/
Jessica Winn, The Distracted Writer:http://thedistractedwriter.com/

8 comments:

  1. Wonderful! And totally intriguing - Lizzie just moved to the top of my wishlist!

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  2. Yikes! I like the punch at the end. I want to know if there really was someone there.

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  3. Oooh. I really like this.. Now for you to write the rest?

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  4. Wowww, this sent shivers down my spine! :)

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  5. Amryn, it is from a book of mine called, The afterlife of Lizzie Monroe :)

    http://www.amazon.com/Afterlife-Lizzie-Monroe-Life-Series-ebook/dp/B00HX89Q5W/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1398941337&sr=8-1&keywords=Lizzie+Monroe

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  6. Well, now I have to read the whole story... Love it!

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